Magazine pitch feedback

Person 1: 

• He included magazines from which he drew inspiration
• He also included a flat plan that helped visualise his magazine 
• There could have been more about the font style he would use 

Person 2:

• Used a flat plan, which he will use as a helpful guideline 
• Used his target audience as a guideline as to what they would like to see
• Could have given more information on fonts that will be used

Person 3: 

• Clear on what will feature in the magazine 
• Informs us on the target audience 
• Should include images of double page spreads from similar magazines