Magazine pitch feedback
Person 1: He included magazines from which he drew inspiration He also included a flat plan that helped visualise his magazine There could have been more about the font style he would use Person 2: Used a flat plan, which he will use as a helpful guideline Used his target audience as a guideline as to what they would like to see Could have given more information on fonts that will be used Person 3: Clear on what will feature in the magazine Informs us on the target audience Should include images of double page spreads from similar magazines